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Thursday, May 13th 2004

7:01 PM

The Love From Anyone

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Nobody seen his pain

They didn’t even care

 Acted like they didn’t know him

Like he wasn’t even there

His life came down to that shiny blade

The one he took from his mother

Earlier that day

He knew he wouldn’t be missed

With that sharp blade

He slid across his wrist

Next to the bed he lay on

Was a note to be read

His parents took the note

Started to cry as the realized

Their youngest son lay dead

"Why did I do it,

What could you have done,

All I wanted was love,

The love from anyone."

Closing the note

Bringing more and more tears

Realizing not being there

Resulted in their son’s life ending here

3 Feedback.

Posted by Rudy:

You did a good job of making it to where all the words flowed, even though I hate reading this such sadness and dispair guess I can relate sometimes so you obviously did a great job writing it if the reader can connect
Saturday, June 26th 2004 @ 9:40 PM

Posted by Takara:

good poem like it not very best i've hear NO AFFENCE but :) still good poem
Tuesday, August 24th 2004 @ 7:47 PM

Posted by Joellyn:

Whoa. Sad poem, I love what you've done to the place thought!;)!!!!!!11
Wednesday, August 25th 2004 @ 7:16 PM

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