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Do they even notice?

The danger is surrounding me,

It's slowly closing in,

I'm to far gone to save myself,

But do they even notice?

I'm drowning in a sea of pain,

Will anyone help me through?

If not then when i'm gone,

Will they even notice?

 

 

so should we be worryed about you or are you just talking symbolicly?

looks great

Way to go Nol...You said what I was only thinking.. but still I would be scared of of her I would not be around her at night

Don't pay any attention to them; there's a fine line between cries for help and good poetry, and I don't think this crosses the line at all. Some of us deal with bad emotions through writing. I like your style Tammy, nice and morbid. The only difference in you and I's style is that you write about the act of dying and I write about people who are already dead (and sometimes undead). There's nothing wrong with being morbid, and you can always profit off off blood and guts. People want to know about the macabre; which is why the horror genre sells so well.

Hindsight is better than foresight: I find it disturbing how differently people will treat someone once they discover what really runs around in that person's mind all day.

As with the other two, I love this. Good job of portraying emotions through the eyes of the 'vitcim'.

i like it but all of ur moods r soo sad when u post the poems well i guess so since they r sad poems

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